> The maps below show the centre of a small town calles Islip as it is now, and the plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. > Write at least 150 words

> The maps below show the centre of a small town calles Islip as it is now, and the plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Write at least 150 words
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The two maps given illustrate the comparison of a small town centre in recent times and in the future its expansion.
Overall
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it can clearly be seen that development has been changed significantly
such
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as the dual carriageway will be built surrounding the facilities areas.
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, the main road will be replaced with a pedestrian way. In terms of the initial map, the main road is all the way from west to east throughout the shops in between.
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, the housing
places
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is located
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in the south of the shops and a park is set in the
south-east
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southeast
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of the main road. On the other map, the amenities
such
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as a bus station, a shopping centre, a car park and new housing areas are projected to be constructed in the north of a walking path,
while
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new housing areas are set to be built on the left of a park
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "set" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • maps
  • centre of a small town
  • development
  • current
  • planned
  • features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
  • summary
  • information
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