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The maps show changes that took place in Liverton city from1980 to until now.

The maps show changes that took place in Liverton city from1980 to until now.
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The maps illustrate the developments which have taken place in the coastal town of Liverton city since 1980.
Overall
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, a lot of changes and transformations have been made during 44 years in the city. The most noticeable is that the shipping way was closed and a Ship Museum was established on the west of the
river
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.
Moreover
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, the bridge and flood barrier have been built in the east. In the north of the
river
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, warehouses have transformed into education centres and kid's playgrounds. The crane, which was between warehouses, was demolished to build a new sailing club.
Further
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 developments were the construction of parking and
river
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 walk in the south of the
river
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.
Furthermore
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, the warehouse in the south of the
river
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 has been converted into apartments. The crane located in the south-west of the
river
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 was demolished and a new hotel has been constructed there.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words river with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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