The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.
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The line graph provides some information about the figure for
tourists
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who have visited Caribbean
Island
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over a period of 7 years.
Overall
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, the
number
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of
tourists
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has increased in total over the entire period.
However
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, the figure for
visitors
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who tended to stay on the
island
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was higher than those who stayed on cruise ships in 2010,
although
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their figure fell below
at the end
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of the period.
To begin
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with, the
number
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of
visitors
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in total was 1
million
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in 2010,
furthermore
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,
this
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number
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saw a significant increase to 2.7
million
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in 2015 and stayed roughly the same until 2016.
However
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, the total
number
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of
visitors
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increased markedly to 3.5
million
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in 2017.
In addition
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, almost 0.3
million
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tourists
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preferred to stay on cruise ships in 2010,
whereas
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,
this
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number
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was higher with regard to the
visitors
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who stayed on the
island
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by around 0.5
million
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in the same year.
Moreover
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, the
number
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of people who stayed on the
island
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began to increase and by the year 2017, their
number
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was 1.5
million
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.
Nevertheless
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, the
number
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of
tourists
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who wanted to stay on the ships fluctuated around 0.3 and 0.5
million
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until 2013, after which, it went up substantially and peaked at 2
million
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in 2017.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, island, number, visitors, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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