The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph provides some information about the figure for
tourists
who have visited Caribbean
Island
over a period of 7 years.
Overall
, the
number
of
tourists
has increased in total over the entire period.
However
, the figure for
visitors
who tended to stay on the
island
was higher than those who stayed on cruise ships in 2010,
although
their figure fell below
at the end
of the period.
To begin
with, the
number
of
visitors
in total was 1
million
in 2010,
furthermore
,
this
number
saw a significant increase to 2.7
million
in 2015 and stayed roughly the same until 2016.
However
, the total
number
of
visitors
increased markedly to 3.5
million
in 2017.
In addition
, almost 0.3
million
tourists
preferred to stay on cruise ships in 2010,
whereas
,
this
number
was higher with regard to the
visitors
who stayed on the
island
by around 0.5
million
in the same year.
Moreover
, the
number
of people who stayed on the
island
began to increase and by the year 2017, their
number
was 1.5
million
.
Nevertheless
, the
number
of
tourists
who wanted to stay on the ships fluctuated around 0.3 and 0.5
million
until 2013, after which, it went up substantially and peaked at 2
million
in 2017.
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  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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