The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph provides some information about the figure for
tourists
who have visited Caribbean Use synonyms
Island
over a period of 7 years.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
has increased in total over the entire period. Use synonyms
However
, the figure for Linking Words
visitors
who tended to stay on the Use synonyms
island
was higher than those who stayed on cruise ships in 2010, Use synonyms
although
their figure fell below Linking Words
at the end
of the period.
Linking Words
To begin
with, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
in total was 1 Use synonyms
million
in 2010, Use synonyms
furthermore
, Linking Words
this
Linking Words
number
saw a significant increase to 2.7 Use synonyms
million
in 2015 and stayed roughly the same until 2016. Use synonyms
However
, the total Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
increased markedly to 3.5 Use synonyms
million
in 2017.
Use synonyms
In addition
, almost 0.3 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
tourists
preferred to stay on cruise ships in 2010, Use synonyms
whereas
, Linking Words
this
Linking Words
number
was higher with regard to the Use synonyms
visitors
who stayed on the Use synonyms
island
by around 0.5 Use synonyms
million
in the same year. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the Linking Words
number
of people who stayed on the Use synonyms
island
began to increase and by the year 2017, their Use synonyms
number
was 1.5 Use synonyms
million
. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
who wanted to stay on the ships fluctuated around 0.3 and 0.5 Use synonyms
million
until 2013, after which, it went up substantially and peaked at 2 Use synonyms
million
in 2017.Use synonyms
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