The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 - 2017
The line chart compares the amount of
tourists
travelling to a specific island
in the Caribbean, whether they stayed on cruise ships or on the island
itself, from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, the total number
of visiting tourists
saw an upward trend. Additionally
, the number
of tourists
who stayed on the island
were
higher than those Correct subject-verb agreement
was
that
stayed on cruise ships for most of the period.
In 2010, there were a Correct pronoun usage
who
million
visitors to the Island
before climbing to 2.5 million
after a four-year period when it continued its increasing trend to 3.5 million
by 2017.
With regard to visitors staying on cruise ships, from 2010 to 2012, its number
remained the same at 0.25 million
until, in 2013, began to rise gradually, ending the period with 2 million
visitors. The number
of tourists
staying on the island
grew from 0.75 million
to 1.5 million
between 2010 and 2013 before plateauing until in
2016 Change preposition
apply
where
it dropped to nearly 1.25 Correct word choice
when
million
before climbing back to 1.5 million
after one year.Submitted by ngocthuykatie on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, island, number, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
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