The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 - 2017

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 - 2017
The line chart compares the amount of
tourists
travelling to a specific
island
in the Caribbean, whether they stayed on cruise ships or on the
island
itself, from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, the total
number
of visiting
tourists
saw an upward trend.
Additionally
, the
number
of
tourists
who stayed on the
island
were
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higher than those
that
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who
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stayed on cruise ships for most of the period. In 2010, there were a
million
visitors to the
Island
before climbing to 2.5
million
after a four-year period when it continued its increasing trend to 3.5
million
by 2017. With regard to visitors staying on cruise ships, from 2010 to 2012, its
number
remained the same at 0.25
million
until, in 2013, began to rise gradually, ending the period with 2
million
visitors. The
number
of
tourists
staying on the
island
grew from 0.75
million
to 1.5
million
between 2010 and 2013 before plateauing until
in
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2016
where
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when
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it dropped to nearly 1.25
million
before climbing back to 1.5
million
after one year.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, island, number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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