The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 - 2017

The line chart compares the amount of

tourists

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travelling to a specific

island

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in the Caribbean, whether they stayed on cruise ships or on the

island

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itself, from 2010 to 2017.

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, the total

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of visiting

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saw an upward trend.

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, the

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of

tourists

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who stayed on the

island

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were

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higher than those

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stayed on cruise ships for most of the period. In 2010, there were a

million

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visitors to the

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before climbing to 2.5

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after a four-year period when it continued its increasing trend to 3.5

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by 2017. With regard to visitors staying on cruise ships, from 2010 to 2012, its

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remained the same at 0.25

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until, in 2013, began to rise gradually, ending the period with 2

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visitors. The

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of

tourists

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staying on the

island

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grew from 0.75

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to 1.5

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between 2010 and 2013 before plateauing until

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2016

where

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it dropped to nearly 1.25

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before climbing back to 1.5

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after one year.