The table below shows the changes in some household types in great britain from 1971 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph delineates how different types of citizens lived in separate household types from 1971 to 2007. In general, there were two groups of

households

: one-person

households

and one-family

households

Additionally

, for one-family

households

, those with dependent

children

had the highest percentages and lone parents had the lowest in 1971.

However

, in 2007, the

one-person

Correct quantifier usage

number of one-person

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groups increased and non-dependent

children

decreased. In 1971, the lone parents’ categories had the lowest percentages of 6

percent

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per cent

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However

, in 2007, it increased to 12

percent

Additionally

, individuals who lived alone

also

increased from 6

percent

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per cent

show examples

in 1971 to 12

percent

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per cent

show examples

in 2007.

Moreover

, families with no

children

also

grew steadily from 19

percent

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per cent

show examples

in 1971 to 25

percent

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per cent

show examples

in 2007.

In contrast

, families with dependent

children

started off with half of the total percentages,

then

decreased slowly to 39

percent

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per cent

show examples

in 2007.

Although

non-dependent child families did see some increase in 1991,

Correct pronoun usage

they

show examples

did experience some decrease from 10

percent

in 1971 to 9

percent

in 2007.

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