The map below is of the town Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows possible sites for the supermarket.
The map illustrates the two proposals for a new supermarket planned for the town of Garlsdon.
Overall
, the population of Garlsdon is 65,000. Therefore
the city is surrounded by three small towns: Hindon where are located 12 kilometres away in the western north of Garlsdon with a 10,000 population capacity, Cransdon in the eastern south far away 25 kilometres away and 29,000 citizens, and Bransdon which is located in the western south with a total of people 15,000.
Initially
, the first location (S1) of the new supermarket was planned to be in the metropolis centre, and no traffic zone in this
area .Also
,it was noticed that the railway crosses this
space from the eastern south to the western south in the countryside. There is a small housing area in the south of this
suggested site .On the other hand
, the second scene (S2), is located in the countryside out of the main town,but still inside the main road. This
spot is close to the big field of inhabitants and out of the industry site.Submitted by enass on
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