The graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The graph shows
,
the population Remove the comma
apply
travelled
to Wrong verb form
travelling
caribbran
Correct your spelling
Caribbean
island
between 2010 and 2017, it include
the digits of tourists who stayed Change the verb form
includes
at
Change preposition
on
cruise
Add an article
the cruise
ship
and on Fix the agreement mistake
ships
island
. In overview, Add an article
the island
a
Correct article usage
the
year
-by-year
number of visitors were accelerated, in addition
, mankind who stayed on water vehicle
Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
are
lower Correct subject-verb agreement
is
in contrast
to people who stayed on the
land Correct article usage
apply
in
a Change preposition
on
caribbean
Change the capitalization
Caribbean
island
till 2015, later it had
Unnecessary verb
apply
a
Correct article usage
apply
vise
versa.
Change the spelling
vice
In every
Change preposition
Every
year
, tourism were risen
gradually till the end of 2017. Change to the active voice
rose
Furthermore
, ship travellers are boosted up after the breakout of 2012 which was less than half a million
, till that
it was Correct word choice
apply
quite
crawl situation, in the same Change the article
quite a
way
Add the comma(s)
way,
island
beings were exceeded after 2011. The count were
Change the verb form
was
bit
fewer Correct article usage
a bit
in
Change preposition
at
beginning
of 2010, but later it Add an article
the beginning
goes
beyond Wrong verb form
went
in
every Change preposition
apply
year
, also
in the year
2013, total 2
Change preposition
of 2
million
visitors visited an
Correct article usage
the
island
, after
that every Correct word choice
and after
year
it
sum-up of 0.5 Correct pronoun usage
apply
million
pupils on
Change preposition
in
Correct article usage
the caribbean
caribbean
. Surprisingly, in 2016, cruise Change the capitalization
Caribbean
mans
were more than people who Correct your spelling
men
kind
to stay on land at location. Add a missing verb
were kind
Besides
, in 2017, boat tripper
were half a Fix the agreement mistake
trippers
million
higher than individuals on islet
.
In conclusion, the crowd Add an article
the islet
an islet
were
liked to visit on Unnecessary verb
apply
enclave
in years 2010 to 2017. Later, in Add an article
the enclave
last
few terms, Correct article usage
the last
tourisms
Fix the agreement mistake
tourism
were
experienced Unnecessary verb
apply
ship
compared to land Fix the agreement mistake
ships
area
.Fix the agreement mistake
areas
Submitted by rohanshingala7781 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island, year, million with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 4 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!