You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Lynwich college site 2006 and now
These maps depict the site of Lynwich
college
in 2006 and the present day.
It is clear from the graphs that more facilities are added to the campus.
Capitalize word
College
Accourding
to what Correct your spelling
According
are
shown, in 2006 and Change the verb form
is
current
time the number of Correct article usage
the current
college
building are 2 buildings. Nowadays, cafeteria
, bus stop, sports Correct article usage
the cafeteria
center
and bike storage Change the spelling
centre
in
the campus Change preposition
on
was not exist
Change the verb form
was not existed
in
Change preposition
on
Correct article usage
the lynwich
lynwich
Correct your spelling
lynch
college
map
in 2006.
Also
, the library location was between car
park and Add an article
the car
sports
field in 2006. The location of the library in Correct article usage
the sports
present
time Correct article usage
the present
Add a missing verb
has change
change
to the Replace the word
changed
be
Unnecessary verb
apply
bellow
Correct your spelling
below
college
building number 2 and to the left of college
building number 1. in
Capitalize word
In
new
campus Correct article usage
the new
map
the a cafeteria in the middle of the map
and different paths lead to it was
not there before.
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
To conclude
, we could say that in the current map
some areas Add a comma
map,
was
not Change the verb form
were
in
Change preposition
on
2006
Correct article usage
the 2006
map
, and others are relocated.Submitted by hguwfhkd on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words college, map with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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