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The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Lynwich college site 2006 and now

The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Lynwich college site 2006 and now
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These maps depict the site of Lynwich
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college
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College
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 in 2006 and the present day. It is clear from the graphs that more facilities are added to the campus.
Accourding
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According
 to what
are
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is
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 shown, in 2006 and
current
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the current
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 time the number of
college
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 building are 2 buildings. Nowadays,
cafeteria
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the cafeteria
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, bus stop, sports
center
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centre
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 and bike storage
in
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on
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 the campus
was not exist
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was not existed
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in
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on
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the lynwich
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lynwich
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lynch
college
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map
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 in 2006.
Also
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, the library location was between
car
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the car
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 park and
sports
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the sports
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 field in 2006. The location of the library in
present
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the present
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 time
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has change
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change
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changed
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 to the
be
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apply
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bellow
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below
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college
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 building number 2 and to the left of
college
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 building number 1.
in
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new
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the new
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 campus
map
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 the a cafeteria in the middle of the
map
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 and different paths lead to it
was
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were
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 not there before.
To conclude
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, we could say that in the current
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map
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map,
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 some areas
was
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were
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 not
in
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on
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2006
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the 2006
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map
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, and others are relocated.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words college, map with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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