The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
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The first below illustrates people ask
wether
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they
was
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destination western country and why the
reasion
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reason
travel for
period
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the period
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from 1994 to 98.
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,
this
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survey
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sampled a cross-section of 100,000.
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, it can be seen
those
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apply
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of
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that
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in 1998 was the highest
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figure
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in Western.
Meanhile
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, The lowest was
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in North
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America in 1995. Look at the details, Starting the biggest which was Western in 1998 at 24,519 followed by in 1997 at 23,661 and
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it was in 1996 at 21,877. The lowest in 1995 and 1995 were under 20,000.
On the other hand
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, Other areas began in 1998 at 2,486 followed by in 1997 it was at 2,227 and
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from it was 1997 to 1994 was under 2,000. Regarding the lowest data, North America started at 1,823 in1998 after that in 1997 it was at 1,559 and
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between 1996 and 1994 were the lowest under 1,500
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