Holiday days are
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event in
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everyChange preposition
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working person.
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this
day they can take their mind off the city's hustle and bustle and enjoy these free days. The question arises where workers should spend their holidays. Some people believe that better to travel abroad,
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think that their own country is the best place. We will discuss both opinions
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and
also
I will speak my opinion
at the end
of
this
essay.
To begin
with the first position. First and foremost,
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abroad is an amazing experience, it is
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unique opportunity to see the world
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eyes.
Moreover
, we can practice
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non-native language,
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exchange
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a cultural experience,
feelCorrect word choice
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yourselfCorrect pronoun usage
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as a part of the global world. Abroad countries provide a lot of miscellaneous sights, more than in the homeland.
some disadvantages exist,
for example
, some countries require a visa or create other bureaucratic obstacles.
Furthermore
, some regions are very expensive, and
also
flights are high-cost.
Overall
, it is
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great variant for rich and active
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.
The next option is a vacation
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within
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country. The major countries
such
as Russia, the large
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nations, and Israel, contain a lot of outstanding places, attractive resorts with
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congenial climate, and
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natural wonders.
Additionally
, knowledge of foreign languages doesn't necessarily but you can better perceive your local culture.
Overall
, it is a low-cost option for
persons that very love
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homeland.
In conclusion, a certain answer
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exist. It depends
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many factors namely your financial welfare, desire to explore new things, and cultural predilections. I
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to the first option
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because I want to discover
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world.