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NEWS STORIES ON TV AND IN NEWSPAPER ARE VERY OFTEN ACCOMPANIED BY PICTURES. SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT THESE PICTURES ARE MORE EFFECTIVE THAN WORDS. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE AND GIVE YOUR OPINION?

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In the digital age, the emergence of
images
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 plays a crucial role in any journalistic product in both
TV
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 and newspapers. It is believed by many that pictures accompanying text will help the public to get the message easier. I do agree with
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 a notion and will explain it
further
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 in
this
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 essay. In the first stage, we have to acknowledge the importance of the picture.
According to
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 an expert on visual culture, John Alaika, words are not as effortless as
images
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 to understand and
may be
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maybe
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 boring for some
people
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. "Not everyone can read,” said Alaika. “But
people
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 are most likely able to recognize
images
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."
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 why cartoon series are more acceptable than news programs on
TV
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 as the medium of communication,
as well as
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a creatively
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creatively
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 way to amuse the public.
Moreover
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, the presence of
images
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 on any news both in
TV
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 and in newspapers will assist audiences to construct the realities.
For example
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, common
people
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 may get confused and not be interested enough when reading an article about “the damaging impact of climate change for human beings” without an illustration that precisely describes it.
In contrast
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, if the public is approached by a sketch illustrating “Earth getting sick”, they may handily come to realise how to nurture our nature to prevent climate change. In conclusion,
it is clear that
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 illustrations or pictures emerging
together with
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 new stories on
TV
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 or newspapers have enormous power to influence
people
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 to engage with the issues talking about. And, I recommend that journalists should be aware
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 the significance of visual culture like presenting pictures in any media coverage.
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task achievement
Ensure to fully elaborate on examples provided for a stronger argument.
coherence cohesion
Consider using more transition words for an even smoother flow between ideas.
introduction conclusion present
The introduction clearly sets the context and your agreement with the topic.
supported main points
You effectively use expert opinions to support your argument.
logical structure
The essay structure is logical and easy to follow.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • convey
  • emotions
  • visual aids
  • retain
  • transcend
  • language barriers
  • accessible
  • misleading
  • context
  • comprehensive
  • critical thinking skills
  • sensitive content
  • graphic
  • disturbing
  • emotional well-being
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