The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the bar chart illustrates the percentages of clean energy sources in four countries which are Sweden witnessed a slight growth throughout the period to reach approximately 10% the same figure did
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, Sweden , Iceland and Turkey in the three years 1997 , 2000 and 2010 .
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