The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Pie chart shows the which transports people used. Table shows reasons why they are used transports.

The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Pie chart shows the which transports people used. Table shows reasons why they are used transports.
The pie chart gives pieces of data about the four transportation that people
use
(Car, LRT, Bus and Taxi ), Meanwhile, The table represents 5 reasons why they
use
transport in Edmonton.
Overall
, Most of the citizens
use
a car (45%) and they
use
LRT (Light Rail Transit )35%, And fewer were used Buses and Taxi which are 10% only.
On the other hand
,The reasons why people
use
transportation are divided into 5 purposes (Commuting to work, Shopping, Leisure activities, Taking children to school and Business). The reason Commute to work (55%) was the greater percentage compared to the other 4 purposes.
Then
, the Business purpose which represented 45%.
Furthermore
, Bus and Taxi transportation
similarly
the same percentages which are 10% only,
As well as
, Shopping and Leisure activities they are the same only 15%.
In addition
, People used transport for Business and Taking children to school reasons (45%) and (40%) respectively.
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