The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
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The line chart illustrates how many visitors visit a Caribbean island over a period of 8 years starting from 2010. As can be seen from the graph, the
number
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of tourists who stayed on ferries and on the island increased over the period shown.
In addition
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, holidaymakers chose cruise ships as
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prevalent accommodation on their holiday. It was clear that the
number
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of visitors staying on ships fluctuated around 0.75
million
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between 2010 and 2013.
While
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1.25
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tourists selected a resort between 2010 and 2011. Afterwards, in 2013, the
number
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of people was double the data from 2 years ago.
However
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, from 2013 to 2017, guests made the choice to sleep on a vessel plummeted by 1.5
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to reach a peak of 2
million
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units.
Whereas
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, people staying in a hotel remained stable at 1.5
million
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between 2013 and 2015.
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, the
number
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of guests who chose a homestay stabilised at 1.5
million
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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