The pie chart represents the types of careers that Antropology graduates after completing their Bachelor’s degree course from one University. The table displays the wages after five years of working in this particular field.

The pie chart represents the types of careers that Antropology graduates after completing their Bachelor’s degree course from one University. The table displays the wages after five years of working in this particular field.
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The pie chart depicts a proportion of Anthropology graduate destinations from one university.
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, the table illustrates a comparison between the salaries of different employment.
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,
it is clear that
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full-time work is over
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half of the total destinations after getting a degree as
Anthropologist
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an Anthropologist
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.
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, working in the government sector or freelance
consultans
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consultants
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are more likely to earn more money than private. As the pie
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chart
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shows, it is
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that
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half of graduates from Anthropology are working in a full-time schedule. In compared a quarter per cent for part-time jobs which is the third times of the lowest figure
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part-time with postgraduate study at 5%. Looking
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the table,
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50% of the graduates are more likely to earn $100000 in the government sector which is the highest.
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Freelance
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the Freelance
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and Government
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sectors
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are less
probable
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likely
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to earn between $25000 and $49999 at 5%.
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