The pie chart represents the types of careers that Antropology graduates after completing their Bachelor’s degree course from one University. The table displays the wages after five years of working in this particular field.
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The pie chart depicts a proportion of Anthropology graduate destinations from one university.
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, the table illustrates a comparison between the salaries of different employment.
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