The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line chart displays the
number
of thousands of travellers in 4 months from June 2013 to September 2013 who visited three different museums which were situated in London.
Overall
, the count of explorers slightly increased for the Science
Museum
and British
Museum
while
the numbers for the Natural History
Museum
decreased over the time period. The
people
were more interested in visiting the British
Museum
in July 2013. The
number
of visitors to the British
Museum
was 600
thousand
in June and
this
number
increased to 750
thousand
in the next month.
Then
there was a dramatic decline in August.
At the end
of next month, these numbers increased up to 650
thousand
.
However
, the
people
were less likely to visit the Natural History
Museum
in July. But in September the
number
of tourists slightly increased. The data showed for the Science
Museum
was a bit lower than the other museums throughout the period. There was a sharp decline of 100
thousand
people
from the month of June to August. In September, tourists liked to visit more, and there was an increase of 150
thousand
people
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, museum, people, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • illustrates
  • number of visitors
  • museums
  • from June to September 2013
  • the British Museum
  • the Natural History Museum
  • the Science Museum
  • overall trend
  • attracted
  • the most visitors
  • fewest visitors
  • peak
  • experienced fluctuations
  • decline
  • highlight
  • dominance
  • consistent decline
  • minor resurgence
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