The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufactures in the years 2005 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The present table compares data about the percentage of cell phones which 7 different companies produced in 2 several years(2005 and 2006).
Overall
, Nokia had a large part of manufacturing instead
of BenQMobile; moreover
, Nokia like other firms except BenQMobile, LG, and Samsung had increasing trends.
According to
the chart, Nokia was the best mobile producer, for in 2005, had 32.5 per cent of the market; thereafter
, in 2006 this
amount had a 2.5% raise from last
year. The second section was Others by 19.2 per cent. Later declined to 16.2%, but secondly
, the company was Motorola which had 17.7 percent in 2005; then
, this
proportion increased to 21.1% in 2006. The third factory was Samsung which had 12.7% in the first years, yet could not develop; as a result
, the percentage had a 1% fall.
The picture shows that LG and Sony Ericsson were roughly the same as each other at the beginning; however
, Sony Ericsson improved its business and cached up 7.4% instead
of LG which had approximately the same figures in both years by 6.5%. The last
company was BenQMobile which was Change preposition
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4.2% and had better efficiency than in 2006.Change preposition
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