The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph illustrates the proportion of tourists on Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
,
It is clear that
the total
number
of visitors increased constantly over the eight-year period.
In addition
, the
number
of
cruise
ship travellers showed dynamic changes compared to other ones. In terms of those who stayed on
cruise
ships and
island
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islands
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began at around 0.75 and 0.25
million
respectively. From 2010 to 2011 vacationers staying on
cruise
ships increased by nearly 0.25
million
,
while
people
who stayed on the
island
remained unchanged. Between 2015 and 2016, the
number
of
people
visiting on
island
overtook those
people
staying on
cruise
ships. Throughout the entire period,
although
the total
number
of tourists began at
1million
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1 million
, it went up by 2.5
million
, resulting in
this
proportion
reached
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reaching
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the peak of 3.5
million
.
Moreover
, travellers spending time on the
island
showed increasing annual figures, and after 2012, those
people
went up to 2
million
in 2017.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, number, cruise, million, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.

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