The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph illustrates the proportion of tourists on Caribbean island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, It is clear that
the total number
of visitors increased constantly over the eight-year period. In addition
, the number
of cruise
ship travellers showed dynamic changes compared to other ones.
In terms of those who stayed on cruise
ships and island
began at around 0.75 and 0.25 Fix the agreement mistake
islands
million
respectively. From 2010 to 2011 vacationers staying on cruise
ships increased by nearly 0.25 million
, while
people
who stayed on the island
remained unchanged. Between 2015 and 2016, the number
of people
visiting on island
overtook those people
staying on cruise
ships.
Throughout the entire period, although
the total number
of tourists began at 1million
, it went up by 2.5 Correct your spelling
1 million
million
, resulting in this
proportion reached
the peak of 3.5 Wrong verb form
reaching
million
. Moreover
, travellers spending time on the island
showed increasing annual figures, and after 2012, those people
went up to 2 million
in 2017.Submitted by dksrlgus1017 on
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