The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.
The diagram illustrates the renovations made to a university campus between the year 2010 and recent times.
Overall
, the most significant changes on the campus are the remodelling and renaming of most buildings and the addition of more residential halls.
Interestingly, at the centre of the campus, a lake was situated, surrounded by a lawn and seating area, which has now been removed. On the northern side of the lake, there was a teaching block comprising art and science classes. Linking Words
This
building has been reconstructed for the sole purpose of art, Linking Words
while
the science class was moved to an opposite building, replacing the university office. The shop and restaurant have been demolished and replaced by student accommodation and a newly installed road beside it.
On the southern side of the lake, two student dormitories were located opposite each other, separated by the main road. Recently, these two buildings have been shifted closer to each other. Linking Words
Consequently
, the one on the right side is now supplanted by a student facility site consisting of shops, offices, and other amenities.Linking Words
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