The Diagram below show how leather goods are produced
The diagram illustrates the process by which leather goods are produced. There are 11 steps from drying different types of animal
skin
as a product, to fabrication of brand skin
bags, shoes and other items.
The operation commences when the animal skin
is dried and carried to the factory by means of lorries. Once the raw material is washed with the water and lime sufficiently, then
the product is soaked with only lime. The next step is
flattening with the help of special machines. However
, the washing process is continued with the soaking water and vegetable matter for tannin.
Following that, a polishing step takes place which makes the skin
as bright as possible. The polished products are loaded onto lorries to transport to factories. Having been manufactured in the factory, items including bags, shoes, fur jackets, balls and others are offered to the customers who really enjoy shopping. The mechanism culminates with making your own style with new leather clothes, shoes and bags.Submitted by checkmyessay9 on
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