Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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waste in the environment which
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causing
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reasons behind
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case providing some solutions to reduce
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and foremost, the
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reason
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it is the production significant increase
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around
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our world
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and
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consequently
,
rubbish
rise .
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,
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the populatin
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populatin
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population
become a lot.
Therefore
,their consumption increases.
Moreover
, some countries lack pins
due to
poverty.
hence
throw
rubbish
any place.
In addition
, one lacks cleanliness in their life,they reside in
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location.
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resolve
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government
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keep pins
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places
to be
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clean.
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, giving individuals instructions and devices about the importance of cleanliness and How to tidy and clean our places.
Furthermore
, put in every
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situation
institution
more
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wasteland
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to avoid diseases and illnesses .As you know
rubbish
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to our
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.
Also
,stop to usage
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of plastic
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bags
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in the
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.
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.evey
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every
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should
be take
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a strict decision about
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to reduce
of
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apply
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rubbish
risks.
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Task Achievement
Addresses the prompt by discussing reasons for increased rubbish production and suggesting governmental solutions.
Coherence and Cohesion
Includes an introduction and conclusion, which helps frame the essay.
Overall
Uses some specific vocabulary related to the topic, such as 'consumption', 'poverty', and 'cleanliness'.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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