The line graph below shows the number of serious crimes that occurred in London between 2003 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the number of serious crimes that occurred in London

between 2003 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.
Overall
, the chart depicts the total number of crimes committed in London between the
years
2003 to 2012, the quantity of which is displayed on the right side in thousands,
Furthermore
, the crimes are categorized into three terms as follows; Armed robbery, assault and
murder
.
Firstly
, the most noticeable pattern that stands out was the form of crimes like "Robbery" and "Assault" in higher amount compared to "
Murder
" where the former grew in trend for almost a year which
then
followed by a steep decline until the year 2008 after which it again rises
then
further
straightens out,
while
the latter mode of crime statistic maintained a more uniform fashion increasing and falling in some
years
which in latter
years
surpassed the former's quantity but at the same time rising after the year 2008.
Secondly
, the other remaining mode of crime is "
Murder
"
also
depicted a prolonged rate of growth till 2005 which
then
subsequently
almost smoothened or straightened out in the later
years
. In Conclusion, it can be mentioned that primarily "Assault" stayed the most prominent type of crime but
initially
, armed robbery was more common which reduced over the
years
and "
Murder
" remained the lowest in quantity .
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