The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.

The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.
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The diagrams compare the significant changes in Bunborough village between recent times and the year 2024.
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while
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the principal changes to the village are expected to include the relocation of residential buildings and the development of commercial centres, some features will stay the same. Presently, Bunborough has a town setting, with a main road leading to Manchester in the northwest and another to Lynwich in the southwest. The eastern section has a beach in its southern region,
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its northern section is primarily for accommodation and retail. A fishing port is situated between the housing area and the beach. By 2024, the village of Bunborough is predicted to become more urbanised. More roads will be constructed to
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connect suburbs with the main road.
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, a train line will run from the northeastern corner of the map to the central southernmost part.
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, the infrastructure of the shops and fishing port will remain unchanged but will be renamed as a promenade. Two hotels are forecasted to be built at opposite ends of the seafront,
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the houses along the linking road will be demolished and moved
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north adjacent to other houses.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further, while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • maps
  • village
  • present day
  • plans
  • 2024
  • overview
  • key differences
  • road network
  • infrastructure
  • residential areas
  • recreational spaces
  • impact
  • environment
  • benefits
  • challenges
  • proposed changes
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