Your friend invited you to his/her birthday party, but you are not able to attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -Explain why you cannot go - say that you will give your friend a gift the next time you see him/her -suggest another time and place to meet
Dear Wadi,
I am writing hope letter finds you well and good mental, I just now read your email and fill
of
email you invited me Change preposition
apply
attend
to your birthday party, Add the particle
to attend
however
, I could'nt
attend Correct your spelling
couldn't
in
your birthday Change preposition
apply
celeberate
.
First of all, I am sorry, Correct your spelling
celebrate
because
I am able Correct word choice
but
come
to your birthday, on Add the particle
to come
sunday
Change the capitalization
Sunday
i
would Change the capitalization
I
like
go to my city, my mom ordered Add the particle
like to
to
me Change preposition
apply
come
back to my home Fix the infinitive
to come
at
Change preposition
in
jakarta
.
Change the capitalization
Jakarta
i
will give you a gift box next time, waiting Change the capitalization
I
in
your house, i buy the gift via online shope, i hope you like my gift Change preposition
at
from
Change preposition
apply
me
.
my Correct pronoun usage
apply
planning
, I will stay Replace the word
plan
at
Change preposition
in
jakarta
Change the capitalization
Jakarta
1
week after that I gonna comeback to Change preposition
for 1
at
java, Change preposition
apply
i
wish you could taking Change the capitalization
I
your
time for me in ordered to meet, if you have time, my schedule Change the word
the
Add a missing verb
is june
june
2 at night we meet at Change the capitalization
June
aston
Change the capitalization
Aston
to
dinner together and story telling about daily of life.
I looking forward to seeing youChange preposition
apply
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coherence and cohesion
Ensure each paragraph covers a single idea. For example, paragraph one could be an apology, paragraph two an explanation, and paragraph three an invitation to meet later.
coherence and cohesion
Improve logical structure by making sure each sentence flows naturally from one to the next. This can be done by using linking words such as 'therefore,' 'however,' 'furthermore,' etc.
coherence and cohesion
Double-check for grammatical errors and ensure the sentences are well-formed. Consider revising awkward constructions such as 'I just now read your email and fill of email you invited me attend to your birthday party'.
suitable writing tone
Try to use a more appropriate and consistent tone. For example, 'I hope this letter finds you well' instead of 'I am writing hope letter finds you well and good mental.'
task achievement
Clearly separate explanations, apologies, and subsequent plans to help the reader follow along better.
task achievement
The core elements required in the prompt are addressed: you stated why you can't attend, mentioned a gift, and suggested another time to meet.
suitable writing tone
The overall tone is friendly, which is suitable for writing to a friend.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,