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The table shows the amount of internet users in various world regions during the period of 2000 to 2010

The table shows the amount of internet users in various world regions during the period of 2000 to 2010
The table compares
internet
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users
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 in various continents during the period of time 2000 to 2010.
Overall
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, there are three gist measurements for
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users
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 based on the
number
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, population and
growth
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 from 2000 to 2010. The highest proportion of
internet
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users
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 are North
America
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, Australia and Europe. There was the highest share of around 78%,
then
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 approximately 60% and exactly 59%, respectively.
Moreover
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, the
number
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 of
internet
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users
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 in Europe and North
America
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are
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 classified as high as 473 and 271
million
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, respectively.
In contrast
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, Australia saw the lowest, just 20
million
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.
In addition
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, the
growth
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 and
number
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 of
internet
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users
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 are classified as low with 137% in North
America
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, 181% in Australia and 353% in Europe. The other group is the
middle
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 percentage of
internet
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users
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. It consists of Latin
America
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, the
Middle
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 East, Asia and Africa. All of them have the highest
growth
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 in
internet
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 use between 2000 and 2010
such
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 as in Africa is 2,421% and 1,785% by the
Middle
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 East and
then
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 Latin
America
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 around 1,123%.
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,
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 Asia has the lowest
growth
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 in
internet
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 use at just 602% it became the highest contribution for the
number
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 of
internet
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users
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 at 921
million
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. In
this
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 group followed by Latin
America
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 at 199
million
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,
then
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 Africa at 109
million
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 and
last
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 is the
Middle
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 East with just 59
million
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, users, number, growth, america, million, middle with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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