You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: +Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing +Express your appreciation +And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address.You should write at least 150 words.

#minutes #accident #person #gratitude #+introduce #+express #appreciation #+and #offer #visit #home #address

Good morning Dear Stephan, I am Claudia, the person who was looked after by you

last

week. I hope

this

letter

founds

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you well. I am

writting

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writing

you

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to you

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to thank you for your dedication and

time

to me. Normally, I am a very

carefully

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person,

therefore

, I

had

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never had an accident in my life. I was not aware of the incapacity to do

stuffs

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stuff

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by myself when I am not able to move. As you might know, my partner is always working all day during

week

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the week

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, whereby I am alone without any sort of

aids

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That is

why I am very grateful to you, and I would like to invite you to my home.

Though

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This

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this

time

, the reason is not

for helping

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me, if not to spend

agreable

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agreeable

time

together.

Moreover

, you could know my couple and my dog, who are living with me. Please, let me know which date is more convenient,

as well as

the

time

. I look forward

your

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prompt response to organize an

incredibly

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meeting. Thank you for all, Claudia.

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suitable writing tone

Work on maintaining a consistent writing tone and improve grammatical accuracy.

logical structure

Ensure every sentence contributes meaningfully to the paragraph's central idea to enhance logical flow.

greeting and closing

The greeting and closing are polite and fitting for the context.

complete response

The letter follows the task instructions effectively, addressing all required points.

single idea per paragraph

Each paragraph clearly accounts for a separate point, making the letter easy to follow.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

176 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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