You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: +Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing +Express your appreciation +And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address.You should write at least 150 words.

Good morning Dear Stephan, I am Claudia, the person who was looked after by you
last
week. I hope
this
letter
founds
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you well. I am
writting
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writing
you
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to you
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to thank you for your dedication and
time
to me. Normally, I am a very
carefully
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person,
therefore
, I
had
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never had an accident in my life. I was not aware of the incapacity to do
stuffs
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stuff
kinds of stuff
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by myself when I am not able to move. As you might know, my partner is always working all day during
week
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the week
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, whereby I am alone without any sort of
aids
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.
That is
why I am very grateful to you, and I would like to invite you to my home.
Though
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this
time
, the reason is not
for helping
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me, if not to spend
agreable
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agreeable
time
together.
Moreover
, you could know my couple and my dog, who are living with me. Please, let me know which date is more convenient,
as well as
the
time
. I look forward
your
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prompt response to organize an
incredibly
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meeting. Thank you for all, Claudia.
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suitable writing tone
Work on maintaining a consistent writing tone and improve grammatical accuracy.
logical structure
Ensure every sentence contributes meaningfully to the paragraph's central idea to enhance logical flow.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are polite and fitting for the context.
complete response
The letter follows the task instructions effectively, addressing all required points.
single idea per paragraph
Each paragraph clearly accounts for a separate point, making the letter easy to follow.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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