Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizers and better machinery. However, some of the methods used to do this may be dangerous to human health and may have negative effects on local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Fruits and
vegies
are being sold Correct your spelling
veggies
cheap
these days, for the reason that many chemicals and good machinery are used. Even Change the word
cheaply
so
these techniques Add a comma
so,
has
many dangerous outcomes to Change the verb form
have
peoples
Change noun form
people's
health
and local communities. I totally agree, these techniques to produce food are very harmful to our health
.
Firstly
, chemicals that are used in farming are very much harmful
than anyone can imagine, even the farmers are in danger because of using Correct quantifier usage
more harmful
it
. Correct pronoun usage
them
For example
, when farmers use
these fertilizers like a spray, they are exposed to inhale
these, which Verb problem
apply
make
them sick and many of them die in a year Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
due to
lack of proper protection. It is said that there are many regulations, which a farmer has to follow to use
it, however
, many of them fail to do so which results in disaster .
Secondly
, fertilized food are
today's biggest problem for Change the verb form
is
Correct article usage
the human's
human's
immune system. They are being ready before the time which results in dangerous Change noun form
human
health
problems. For instance
, eating food that is
fertilized has such
chemicals inside which are not safe to consume. Fix the agreement mistake
apply
That is
why it is said to wash all fruits and vegetables, even after washing, it is not 100% safe for consumption.
to conclude
, there may be many improvised fertilizers and machinery, but they have their side effects as well, none of them is 100% perfect to use
, it is better to go for organic farming, and use
natural compost, just like our ancestors use
to do it. It has many Change the form of the verb
used
benefical
outcomes rather than modern techniques which results in Correct your spelling
beneficial
health
problems.Submitted by MK on
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