A large number of individuals prefer to have their own motor vehicles to get around the city.
However
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it is clear that
it is a big issue Linking Words
such
as carbon dioxide emission into the air . The most viable solution is increasing Linking Words
Use synonyms
tax
on cars by the government.
The principal cause is associated with Correct article usage
the tax
gasses
CO2. Automobiles which work with petrol, their electric motor generates CO2. Replace the word
gas
Therefore
, the environment deteriorates , Linking Words
also
humans Linking Words
too
have problems with health like headaches. Rephrase
apply
For example
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scientists
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scientists'
scientist's
researches show
that one of the main Correct subject-verb agreement
research shows
reason
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reasons
of
global warming is that Change preposition
for
wheels
quantity Correct your spelling
the
going
up every day and their gasses destroy the Earth which can come to that all people can disappear from our planet.
To tackle Verb problem
of water goes
this
problem the government should raise the taxes Linking Words
for
cars. When a person buys a car , he pays Change preposition
on
tax
for that and a big Use synonyms
tax
can decrease the amount of drivers, owing to a budget which they do not have . Use synonyms
For instance
, Denmark has the highest taxes for cars, Linking Words
because
of that more humans choose bicycles or public Correct word choice
and because
transports
. In a Fix the agreement mistake
transport
way
it can help people’s health.
To summarize , many people’s interest in having their own motors can cause problems like CO2 emission. For decline, that Add a comma
way,
tax
for automobiles must move upward. I believe that humans will understand Use synonyms
consequences
of using automobiles and that their upsurge have huge problems for us, Correct article usage
the consequences
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also
for the planet.Correct word choice
and also
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