Nowadays people can buy a large variety of household goods more than ever before in most countries in the world.what is the cause of it?Is it a good or bad development?Give your opinion and examples.

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Dear Sir, My name is Dmitry Bulgakov and I have an appointment
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an
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at 4pm today, but,
unfortunately
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I have another meeting at 3pm in the hospital on the other side of the city. It was planned two weeks ago and I forgot about it,
thi
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that
is only my fault.
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, I can not move it to another day, because my doctor is going to go
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vacation for 1 month very soon and I need to refresh my prescription. I am so sorry, but I am afraid I
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not be able to attend at college
interview
today. I sincerely ask you to give me another
chanse
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chance
and to
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reschedule
this
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meeting
on any other day of the week.
Additionaly
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, could you please clarify
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conditions please - how long does the
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and will there be any tests given during the
interview
? Kind regards, Bulgakov Dmitry
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  • International trade
  • Trade barriers
  • Tariffs
  • Technological advancements
  • Automation
  • Manufacturing processes
  • Efficiency
  • E-commerce platforms
  • Consumers
  • Competition
  • Innovation
  • Diversification
  • Standard of living
  • Disposable income
  • Demand and supply
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