Many scientists believe that seeking out life by sending messages into space is a good idea while others feel that it is dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A number of
scientists
think that sending
messages
to planets in order to search
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is preferable,
while
others believe it is threatening. Sending
messages
could be useful for
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non-human language, but it would contribute to the start of the
war
between planets if there were some
misuderstandings
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misunderstandings
misunderstanding
between people and aliens. On the one hand, sending
messages
could allow
scientists
to translate
interplanetal
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interplanetary
language, which may bring
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friendship
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.
That is
to say, they can search for specific language if someone would reply to them.
This
would boost science if people would have got it. To illustrate, in
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a science
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fiction film called 3 Body
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, a scientist
sent
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message
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to other planets.
As a result
, she got
a new information
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about
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aliveness
and it contributed to the development of astronomy.
However
, the responder wrote that people should avoid sending
messages
because
alliens
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aliens
might not understand and think that the message is the treaty of
war
.
On the other hand
, there would be misunderstanding among
alliens
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aliens
allies
.
This
is because they can not understand fully the message and think that it is the danger caused by other creatures.
Consequently
,
alliens
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aliens
might search for
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the location
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from where it was sent and start to prepare for
war
. In most films, dedicated to science fiction, there were demonstrations of scared
alliens
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aliens
and preparing for
war
.
That is
why, I think
scientists
should leave it as it may
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lead
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to catastrophic
consequencies
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consequences
. In conclusion, transmitting
messages
would be helpful in translation if
scientists
considered all aspects and were careful in each detail of their
messages
.
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