In our world, there are a lot of good things. These things affect our
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Television is one of these things. Some people think that
this
is a positive development,
while
others disagree and think it may lead to adverse ramifications.
This
essay will
Television agrees
that is
beneficial.
This
essay will discuss both points of view.
First of all,watching
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.
In addition
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TV
can be
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to rest and relax
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many
children
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time
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and relax.
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.
On the other hand,
Television may be to laziness and lethargy to
children
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In other words
,
kids
who like watching
TV
may have some
such
as less to engage in physical activities .As an
example
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children
spend long hours, will
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problems
such
as obesity. To give a clear
example
, my daughter gained 10 kilo grams from watching
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By way of conclusion, after a detailed analysis of both points of
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, I believe that watching
TV
in spend
time
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lethargy and obesity.