The unlimited use of c ars many cause problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems, should we discourage people to use cars? Give areason for your answer and include any revelant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

The excessive use of

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may lead to negative impacts.

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includes

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air

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pollution and too much

traffic

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. Humankind should be advised on alternative

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of transport. First of all, the more

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cars are used, the more the environment is polluted. They produce too much noise when they are hooting

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produce

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smell to the

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which is harmful to the community.

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Cambridge University on the causes of pollution

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showed that

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contributed to almost 50

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of all

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air

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pollutants.

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shows that excessive usage of

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mainly by private users has greatly influenced them to have undesirable effects

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the environment.

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, especially in urban areas high usage of

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has led to increased cases of

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especially in the morning,

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hour and

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the evening.

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is because most of

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stations open and close mainly

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same time

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large

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number of workers will be either

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going to work, to have lunch or

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going home and

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will cause

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on the roads.

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, for the past five

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London has experienced high

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due to

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increased

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the increased

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number of

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is

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caused by their affordability. Around 95

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of residents in London own a car and

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makes the roads to be full throughout the day. In conclusion, I believe that

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the fact that

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cause high

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and pollute the

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, people should be discouraged from using them and use alternate methods like a train to move from one place to the other and encourage

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the use

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of public

vehicles

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as well in order to carb the negative effects.