Governments should spend money on rai/ways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, it is believed that

people

encouraged governments to prioritize their budgets on

development

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the development

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of public transportation

mode

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modes

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, like railways,

compare

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to the construction of

roads

. As someone who commutes all day throughout the city, I tend to agree with

this

movement. Better public

transportations

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transportation

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are

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is

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essential for a city to have. One major advantage of prioritizing the infrastructure of railways, rather than

roads

, is that

cities

are able to provide facilities to accommodate

public’s

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the public’s

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massive mobilization. It connects

people

and

help

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to

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them to

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arrive faster at a certain place, rather than getting stuck in some congested areas

due to

traffic jams.

Moreover

, the

roads

have been full of

people

driving, which makes

people

have to deal with slowing every day. Fixing potholes or maximizing

under construction

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roads

are

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is

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never going to be enough to solve traffic problems

,

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if choosing to utilize

the

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apply

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public transportation is not

favorable

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for majorities.

Furthermore

, the increasing quality of railway transportation can lead to an increase in

cities

’ infrastructure.

Therefore

, businesses are growing, since there are enough facilities for

people

to work

on

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other

cities

. The

development

of Indonesia’s mass rapid transport which connects

cities

set a good example. Since the launching of

such

transport, there are more

people

that

able

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are able

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to work in Jakarta when their homes are located in Bandung, Tangerang, and Bogor. Undoubtedly, it is not only increasing the productivity of companies located in Jakarta

,

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but

also

the diversity of their employees where there will be many

people

with diverse ethnic backgrounds from across the city. In conclusion, I believe that it is better for the governments to support the

development

of railways rather than focusing on road

constructions

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construction

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. The decisions will

not

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be not

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only beneficial for communities

,

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but

also

for companies and industry leaders. If

cities

are accessible to society, it is evidence that the governments are

concerning

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concerned

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the

development

across nations.