The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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This

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diagram illustrates how

sugar

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is produced from

sugar

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canes

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which consists of 4 phases including farming, crushing, separating and drying.

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there are 7 steps involved in order to produce

large

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amount of fine

sugar

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Firstly

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, during the farming

phase

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sugar

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canes

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are planted and well nourished for 1 to 1.5 years and apparently,

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is the longest process.

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, the

sugar

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canes

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are harvested either manually or with a specialist harvesting machine.

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during the crushing

phase

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sugar

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canes

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are crushed multiple times using a machine until all liquid

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forced out from the

sugar

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cane’s residues. Next will be the separation

phase

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involving

step

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4 to 6. During the fourth step,

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juice will be purified through a funnel filled with

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a limestones

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limestones

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filter and

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boiled in an evaporator under extreme heat to turn the juice into syrup.

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in the separation

phase

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sugar

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crystal

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crystals

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are isolated from syrup using

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a centrifuge

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before the drying

phase

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where the

sugar

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are

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dried and cooled. The dried

sugar

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are

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ready to be used by the consumers.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, canes, phase with synonyms.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

175 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

manufacturing process
sugar cane
harvesting
transporting
factory
crushing
extracting
juice
filtering
impurities
heating
evaporating
syrup
boiling
crystallizing
sugar
separating
drying
packaging
distribution
stage
process

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The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

People are now living in a “throwaway society” where things are used for a short period of time and then thrown away.What are the causes of this and what problems does it cause?

NOWADAYS many people complain that they have difficulites getting enough sleep. what problems can lack of sleep cause? what can be done about lack of sleep?

Some people think that students should study in their own city. However, many students prefer to study far away from their home. Do the advantages of studying away from home outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this viewpoint?

In the future, the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. Do you agree or disagree?