The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This

diagram illustrates how

sugar

is produced from

sugar

canes

which consists of 4 phases including farming, crushing, separating and drying.

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there are 7 steps involved in order to produce

large

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amount of fine

sugar

.

Firstly

, during the farming

phase

,

sugar

canes

are planted and well nourished for 1 to 1.5 years and apparently,

this

is the longest process.

Secondly

, the

sugar

canes

are harvested either manually or with a specialist harvesting machine.

Thirdly

during the crushing

phase

,

sugar

canes

are crushed multiple times using a machine until all liquid

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forced out from the

sugar

cane’s residues. Next will be the separation

phase

involving

step

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4 to 6. During the fourth step,

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juice will be purified through a funnel filled with

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limestones

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filter and

further

boiled in an evaporator under extreme heat to turn the juice into syrup.

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in the separation

phase

,

sugar

crystal

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crystals

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are isolated from syrup using

centrifuge

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before the drying

phase

where the

sugar

are

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dried and cooled. The dried

sugar

are

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ready to be used by the consumers.