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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a areport for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a areport for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The given line graph illustrates the information about the differences in
wheat
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exports
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 over three various locations during the period from 1985 to 1990.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 both nations including
Canada
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 and
Australia
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 had a slight fall in
wheat
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exports
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,
while
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 the European Community had the opposite trend between 1990 and 1985. It
also
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 can be seen that in the
year
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 1988,
Canada
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 was the country which had the largest
wheat
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exports
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. In the first
year
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,
Canada
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 exported 20
million
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tonnes
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 of
wheat
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 which was the biggest production
while
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 the
wheat
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exports
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 in
Australia
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 were the lowest ( about 15
million
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tonnes
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 ) in the first
year
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 in
this
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 period. After one
year
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,
wheat
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exports
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 in
Canada
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 and
Australia
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 were nearly 17% .
However
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,
Canada
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's
wheat
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exports
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 rose dramatically from 17 to over 20
million
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tonnes
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 and reached a peak of 25
million
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tonnes
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 in 1988,
whereas
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, there was a decrease in
Australia
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'swheat
exports
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 from 1987 to 1989, by 2,5 per cent. In the
last
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 two years,
Canada
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 and
Australia
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also
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 dropped the amount of
wheat
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exports
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, was 17% and 12%. In 1985, the European Community exported 17
million
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tonnes
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 of
wheat
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.
Nevertheless
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, after three years, the total of
wheat
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exports
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 had an insignificant decline by around 2 per cent.
Nonetheless
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, between 1988 to 1990, there was a growth in the European Community's
wheat
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exports
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 and became the the place that had the largest
wheat
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exports
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 in the final
year
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, was over 20
million
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tonnes
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, exports, canada, australia, year, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • wheat exports
  • trend
  • significant increases
  • significant decreases
  • fluctuations
  • periods of stability
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • similarities
  • differences
  • key points
  • potential reasons
  • climatic conditions
  • agricultural policies
  • market demand
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