The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy, and Austria between 1995 and 2005
The given line graph illustrates how much money people spent on
books
in four different countries, namely Germany
, Italy, France, and Austria
from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
, it is evident that all four countries experienced an upward trend in books
Fix the agreement mistake
book
purchasing
over 20 years. Replace the word
purchases
Germany
was the leader with the highest amount of cash spent on books
even though there was a tiny increase only. Austria
was noticed as the country witnessed the most significant growth over the period.
As you can see, at the beginning of period
, the expenditure on Add an article
the period
books
in Germany
was on
the top, with 80 million US dollars Change preposition
at
while
France and Italy followed after with 50 and 55, respectively. Austria
spent least
money on Change the article
the least
books
with the
only 30 million US dollars.
Correct article usage
apply
However
, Germany
experienced a fluctuated
decrease from 90 to 85 in 1999 and 2003, respectively. Replace the word
fluctuating
Besides
that, Italy and France did not show any significant change over time by
only Change preposition
apply
increase
Correct article usage
an increase
10
million. Change preposition
of 10
Austria
started at the lowest point with 30 in 1995 but raised
significantly to 70 in 2005 and became the third country on the graph by surpassing Italy.Verb problem
rose
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, germany, austria with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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