The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.

The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The provided bar graph illustrates some data related to the spending on goods in the UK and France within a time span of one year (2010). Five various goods are being compared.
Overall
, a glance at the graph reveals that most of the expenses were connected with
cars
,
whereas
the least costs were related to perfume in both countries. Now, turning to the details, with regards to France, the maximum amount of money, 400,000, reflected
cars
,
while
the minimum expenditure, 150,000, applied to cameras. An approximately equal amount of money was spent on
cars
and computers (400,000 and roughly 370,000 respectively). Only 150,000 pounds were spent on cameras in 2010 in France.
According to
the data, in the UK most of the costs were associated with
cars
(450,000),
while
the least expenses were related to perfume (about 140,000). It is interesting to note that people in the UK invested money in books (approximately 400,000).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words cars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • consumer goods
  • chart
  • countries
  • overall
  • compare
  • analyze
  • categories
  • consumer spending
  • trends
  • proportions
  • statistics
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant
  • notable
  • remarkable
  • substantial
  • considerable
  • determine
  • conclude
  • in conclusion
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