Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration above shows the planned project given two possible areas to construct a new shopping mall in a city that
are
mentioned as S1 and S2 respectively. Change the verb form
is
Furthermore
, the city centre is depicted in the central position of the map while
industrial
estate is to the east, Add an article
the industrial
housing
state to the north-west and the golf course/park area is to the western part.
Correct article usage
the housing
Firstly
, Considering the location on
the upper suggested region it lies between a flowing waterway,and a railway track Change preposition
of
while
a road passes through the estate bordering in the north.
Expanding on the other proposed possible locality, which is located further
south between the rail tracks and roads running vertically on both its
sides, the exact coordinates for Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
site are to the southeast compared to the previously mentioned site.
In Conclusion, the two localities projected are on different sides of the map surrounded by similar convenience structures for transportation while
on the other hand
, they border with distinct, already established estates.Submitted by toqeer44 on
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