Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos while others think that zoos are both entertainment and fun, discuss both the views and give your opinions.
Zoos
have been one of the most controversial topics worldwide. While
many people argue that those spots have no the most convenient properties to be considered a proper habitat where animals
should not only be nurtured but also
live, many others believe that there are many tools that have allowed us to create the proper environments to breed animals
. I consider that both sides have to be taken into account, and in this
essay, I will explain my reasons in detail.
To start with, it is well-known that all animals
have their own physiological attributes and features in order to survive in wildlife. Therefore
, humanity has to respect the environment as well as
ecosystems by caring for all flora and fauna. This
means that if animals
or plants belong to a specific region, then
any variation will lead to an unbalanced ecosystem. For instance
, biologists have proved that since travelling to the North Pole has been allowed, most bears have changed their behaviours because of their interaction with humans. As a consequence
of this
, their natural patterns and traits have been modified.
Conversely
, many zoologists argue that the environmental characteristics which are required to simulate proper habitats have been achieved by implementing the most innovative methods already invented. Consequently
, all zoos
must fulfil the requirements to guarantee that the places where they are bringing up and taking care of animals
have the necessary atmosphere to avoid changing their nature. For instance
, The Australian Government has established that zoos
, where there are koalas, should respect their pattern of sleep for 16 hours as well as
prevent them from contracting pneumonia secondary to the spreading of Chlamydia sp. Because this
is the most common cause of death.
To sum up
, although
zoos
have been considered places where caged animals
are not being cared for by the population, many other characteristics should be taken into account, such
as their purposes, agreements done by governments, and cutting-edge techniques that have been implemented in order to resemble their habitats.Submitted by luciaagudelomotta on
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task achievement
Try to further elaborate on the discussion by addressing counterarguments. For instance, mention ethical considerations or the role of captive breeding programs in species conservation.
coherence cohesion
Improve coherence by using more varied transitional phrases to connect sentences and paragraphs smoothly. This will enhance the logical flow of the essay.
task achievement
The essay provides a balanced discussion of both views regarding zoos, staying on topic throughout.
coherence cohesion
Strong introduction and conclusion, framing the discussion effectively and summarizing the key points.
task achievement
Good use of specific examples, such as the situation with bears in the North Pole and koalas in Australian zoos.
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