Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos while others think that zoos are both entertainment and fun, discuss both the views and give your opinions.
Zoos
have been one of the most controversial topics worldwide. Use synonyms
While
many people argue that those spots have no the most convenient properties to be considered a proper habitat where Linking Words
animals
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live, many others believe that there are many tools that have allowed us to create the proper environments to breed Linking Words
animals
. I consider that both sides have to be taken into account, and in Use synonyms
this
essay, I will explain my reasons in detail.
To start with, it is well-known that all Linking Words
animals
have their own physiological attributes and features in order to survive in wildlife. Use synonyms
Therefore
, humanity has to respect the environment Linking Words
as well as
ecosystems by caring for all flora and fauna. Linking Words
This
means that if Linking Words
animals
or plants belong to a specific region, Use synonyms
then
any variation will lead to an unbalanced ecosystem. Linking Words
For instance
, biologists have proved that since travelling to the North Pole has been allowed, most bears have changed their behaviours because of their interaction with humans. Linking Words
As a consequence
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this
, their natural patterns and traits have been modified.
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Conversely
, many zoologists argue that the environmental characteristics which are required to simulate proper habitats have been achieved by implementing the most innovative methods already invented. Linking Words
Consequently
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zoos
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animals
have the necessary atmosphere to avoid changing their nature. Use synonyms
For instance
, The Australian Government has established that Linking Words
zoos
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as well as
prevent them from contracting pneumonia secondary to the spreading of Chlamydia sp. Because Linking Words
this
is the most common cause of death.
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To sum up
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although
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zoos
have been considered places where caged Use synonyms
animals
are not being cared for by the population, many other characteristics should be taken into account, Use synonyms
such
as their purposes, agreements done by governments, and cutting-edge techniques that have been implemented in order to resemble their habitats.Linking Words
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task achievement
Try to further elaborate on the discussion by addressing counterarguments. For instance, mention ethical considerations or the role of captive breeding programs in species conservation.
coherence cohesion
Improve coherence by using more varied transitional phrases to connect sentences and paragraphs smoothly. This will enhance the logical flow of the essay.
task achievement
The essay provides a balanced discussion of both views regarding zoos, staying on topic throughout.
coherence cohesion
Strong introduction and conclusion, framing the discussion effectively and summarizing the key points.
task achievement
Good use of specific examples, such as the situation with bears in the North Pole and koalas in Australian zoos.