The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
The given chart shows the
percentage
of households
owning and renting accommodation
in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Overall
, the percentage
of households
in rented accommodation
was the highest in 1918 and that of households
in owned accommodation
was the smallest in the same year.
From 1918 to 1939, the percentage
of households
in owned accommodation
rose rapidly from above 20 per cent
to above 30 per cent
. However
,in that period, the percentage
of households
in rented accommodation
decreased from nearly 80 per cent
to roughly 70 per cent
. Moreover
, the ratios of both types relatively had no changes from 1939 to 1953. Between 1953 and 2001, the percentage
of households
owning accommodation
increased gradually and reached a peak in 2001, which made up approximately 40,50,60,67,70 per cent
respectively. In contrast
, that in rented accommodation
fell steadily and hit a low in 2001, which fell to roughly 60,50,40,32,30 per cent
respectively. Finally
, nearly 35 per cent
and 65 per cent
were percentages of households
in rented and owned accommodation
in 2011.Submitted by duongntt.tld on
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