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The pie charts illustrate the portion of students at one university in the UK who can speak other languages besides English, in the years 2000 and 2010.

The pie charts illustrate the portion of students at one university in the UK who can speak other languages besides English, in the years 2000 and 2010.
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The pie chart describes the portion of
students
 at a university in the UK who can communicate in other
languages
 either than
English
, in the years 2000 and 2010. In 2000, most of the
students
 could speak Spanish at 30%;
while
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 20% of the
students
 couldn't speak any other
languages
 other than
English
.
Moreover
,
students
 who only spoke in French and those who could speak other
languages
 make up 30% of the
students
 combined. The remaining 20% consisted of
students
 who only spoke German and
students
 who spoke two other
languages
.
On the other hand
, in 2010. the population of
students
 who only spoke Spanish had increased to 35%;
furthermore
, the number of
students
 who communicate in another language increased to 20%.
Students
 who converse in two other
languages
also
 added to their population by 15%.
However
, the number of French speakers and
English
 speakers had a decrease to 10%.
To conclude
, the population of
students
 who spoke in other
languages
 other than
English
 changed from 2000 to 2010, with most of the
students
 able to speak Spanish.
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