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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates
on
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apply
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how the
bottles
 are manufactured using
the recycling
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recycled
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 plastic.
Overall
, there are 10 steps involved in
this
 process commencing with people throwing
trashes
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trash
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 into the garbage bin and ending with products for consumption.
Firstly
, the plastic
bottles
 are collected by the garbage truck so that
it
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they
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 can be transported to the factories for transformation.
Next,
workers will sort out the
bottles
 by distinguishing the right type suitable to be processed. Later, these
bottles
 will be compressed into blocks making it easier to be crushed in the next process. During
this
 time, blocks will be ground into pieces falling down into
water
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 container to be cleansed. After that, those pieces will be processed through a machine to turn into pellets that appear in different
shape
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shapes
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. Meanwhile, these pellets will be heated
in
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certain
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 temperature to form raw material. Once the raw material is ready, it will be used to manufacture end products and
send
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sent
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into
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to
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 supermarkets and
shop
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shops
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 to be used by consumers.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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