The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
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The pie charts provide key information about the health nutrient of two types: medium baked
potato
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, and
macaroni
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. All the units are measured by percentages.
Overall
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, it is clear from the chart that carbs are the most nutrients in these two types.
In addition
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, it can observed that there are
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huge data differences between these two items.
According to
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what is shown, carbs in the
macaroni
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and
potato
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are the peck elements at 52%, and 35% shares, respectively.
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, the glucose in these dinners is nearly the same with a small difference where
potato
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15
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%
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percent
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per cent
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while
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macaroni
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11
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%
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percent
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per cent
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. As can be seen in the charts, the lowest
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percent
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per cent
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in
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the
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macaroni
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is
other
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another
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nutrient
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at 5%,
while
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the
potato
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have
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a large number at mostly 15%
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percent
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per cent
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.
Furthermore
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, the second largest amount in the
potato
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is
protien
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protein
while
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the fat in the
macaroni
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is. The data suggested that the fat in the
macaroni
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is higher than the
potato
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words potato, macaroni, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutritional consistency
  • carbohydrates
  • proteins
  • fats
  • vitamins
  • minerals
  • fiber
  • proportion
  • component
  • pie graph
  • comparison
  • significant
  • balance
  • healthy
  • dietary choices
  • implications
  • absent
  • presence
  • macro-nutrients
  • micro-nutrients
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