The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.
The pie charts provide key information about the health nutrient of two types: medium baked
potato
, and macaroni
. All the units are measured by percentages.
Overall
, it is clear from the chart that carbs are the most nutrients in these two types. In addition
, it can observed that there are a
huge data differences between these two items.
Correct article usage
apply
According to
what is shown, carbs in the macaroni
and potato
are the peck elements at 52%, and 35% shares, respectively. Moreover
, the glucose in these dinners is nearly the same with a small difference where potato
15
% Add a missing verb
is 15
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
while
macaroni
11
% Add a missing verb
is 11
percent
.
As can be seen in the charts, the lowest Change the spelling
per cent
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
in
Change preposition
of
the
Correct article usage
apply
macaroni
is other
Change the wording
another
nutrient
at 5%, Fix the agreement mistake
nutrients
while
the potato
have
a large number at mostly 15% Change the verb form
has
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Furthermore
, the second largest amount in the potato
is protien
Correct your spelling
protein
while
the fat in the macaroni
is. The data suggested that the fat in the macaroni
is higher than the potato
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Vocabulary: Replace the words potato, macaroni, percent with synonyms.
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