The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.
The given pie charts illustrate the data which is the
proporties
of nutritional consistency of two diets,medium baked Correct your spelling
proportion
properties
potato
and macaroni
. Overall
, the rate of carbohydrates is the highest, the previous diet is 35% and the post diet
is 52%.
In Add a hyphen
post-diet
medium baked
Add a hyphen
medium-baked
potato
, Fix the agreement mistake
potatoes
the
carbohydrates Correct article usage
apply
is
the key consistency. Change the verb form
are
Then
, the rate of protein and the glocose
is 25% and 15% respectively. The saturated fat is the lowest percentage which is 10%. The remaining percentage rates Correct your spelling
glucose
15
%.
Add a missing verb
are 15
Furthermore
, the
carbohydrates Correct article usage
apply
is
important in the Change the verb form
are
macaroni
, which is exceed
50%. The Change the verb form
exceeds
proporty
of protein and the Correct your spelling
proportion
glocose
is the same which is 11%. Correct your spelling
glucose
However
, the saturated fat is the second ranking
, which is 21%. The other nutrients Add a hyphen
second-ranking
is
5% only.
Compared with Change the verb form
are
two
dinners, the medium baked Correct article usage
the two
potato
has the average nutrients than the macaroni
because the sugar fat of macaroni
is more 11% than another
. Correct quantifier usage
apply
Therefore
, people should have the
Correct determiner usage
one
potato
of
bake rather than another.Change preposition
apply
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words potato, macaroni with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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