The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates
that
the number of Correct word choice
apply
families
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families'
family's
income
in the US in the year
2007, 2011, and 2015.
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years
Overall
, the annual income
for each household throughout the years were
steady with no dramatic changes.
In 2007, 25 Change the verb form
was
million
families
had less than 25 thousand
dollars income
, and just over approximately 25 Change preposition
in income
million
households had from 25-50 thousand
income
. Change preposition
in income
Furthermore
, around 20 million
households have had 50-75 US dollars. However
, the highest annual income
with
100 Change preposition
of
thousand
or more was the majority with just under 30 million
families
.
On the other hand
, in 2011, the majority for
Change preposition
of
the
household incomes were 25-50 Correct article usage
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thousand
dollars and
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follows
Wrong verb form
followed
it
the Correct pronoun usage
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families
with less than 25 thousand
. Also
, the 100 thousand
or more income
decreased a little, and the 50-75 thousand
was constant.
Lastly
, in 2015, the 100 or morse
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more
thousand
increased by far the most with approximately 33 million
families
. Moreover
, the families
from less than 25 to 75 thousand
were the same as 2011
. All in all, the economic state Change preposition
in 2011
for
Change preposition
of
the
US households in 2015 has increased since 2007.Correct article usage
apply
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words families, income, million, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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