The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The provided diagram shows how the central library was 20 years ago and how it stands now.
This
library is open to the public which is why it holds four different rooms
as well as
common areas in the middle. It has changed in the
last
two decades as generations are evolving. The
centeral
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central
area used for tables and
chair
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have
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been disregarded in the recent layout.
However
, some rooms like the children's book area just moved across with added benefits for the younger generation to enjoy. The inquiry desk looks like it was moved from
entrance
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to an
isle
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with new technologies that make consumers serve themselves. A lecture room was
also
added in its own independent place. Other than changes from one side of the library to the other, the main difference from the previous diagram is how they are cooperating with the technologies that have
arrised
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arisen
arrived
in recent years and implementing them for an easier and quicker service.
While
creating a free space for children and adults for children
story telling
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events and lectures respectively.
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