Many elderly people are no long looked after their families are put in care homes pr nursing homes. What is the advantage and disadvantages of this trend.

Nowadays,It is becoming more and more popular for

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to put their elderly families in

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nursing

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.Generally speaking,most

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tend to put their old parents in a

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home

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of taking

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of them in their own homes.It is obvious that there are a lot of advantages and disadvantages of putting old

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in a

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essay,I will address some benefits and drawbacks of

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adults. Let's begin by looking at some merits of putting older

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in a rest

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,It is considered that the old community might get

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proffessional

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professional

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in a collective living space by

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nurses

.Clearly,with the rising ages Not only do not older

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look after

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themselves,But

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they may suffer from a lot of various diseases.

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,It is believed that going to an institution can be significantly helpful.Another notable pro is that older

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could be able to communicate with their same

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in a nursing

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.As a matter of fact,If most elderly

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have plenty of time,they will often prefer to spend it with other older community. Turning to the other side of the argument,keeping older

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a rest

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might have some cons.

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,putting older

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in a

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home

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will be vital and practical unless they feel

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because of being away from their families.

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the old

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are more sinister than other

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and might feel they are alone in a rest

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.

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,elderly

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require more feelings with more attending.Another striking drawback is that older

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can lose the sense of independence when they are kept in

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institution.Actually,elderly persons are taken

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nurses in a dedicated room which is not for them,which means they endure from lack of

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.

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,despite the fact that keeping older

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in a collective living space can be crucial for their health and relations,It is

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harmful

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their emotions and freedom.