The chart below shows information about students studying six main subjects at a US university in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates how many
students
enrolled in six major subjects at a university in the United States in the year 2010.
It is evident that finance was the most widely interested among both male and female Use synonyms
students
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while
engineering was notably the least popular option.
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number
of female and male Use synonyms
students
enrolled in finance shared a similar figure of 225 Use synonyms
students
, reaching the highest Use synonyms
number
among the six disciplines. The data on learners joining accounting subjects were lower with both genders, particularly since there were 200 female learners, almost 30 Use synonyms
students
higher than males. Men and women enrollment in marketing, Use synonyms
however
, constituted the lowest numbers, the former taking up 120 and the latter 60 Linking Words
students
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On the other hand
, approximately 200 male learners participated in Mathematics, compared with 60 of the opposite gender. As for Economics, the Linking Words
number
of male Use synonyms
students
was 150, doubling that of their counterparts. Among the six subjects, engineering accounted for a very small Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
students
, with just over 50 males and 50 females enrolled.Use synonyms
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