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The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph depicts the mean proportion of monthly
price
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 alteration for Copper,
Nickel
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, and Zinc in the
year
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 2014. All in all, despite the fact that the
Nickel
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percentage
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change
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 was by far the highest in January, it drastically fell to the lowest in December.
In contrast
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, Zink started with the lowest
percentage
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change
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 and ended with the highest.
However
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, the
percentage
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change
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 of Copper fluctuated during the
year
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 2014. All three metals declined in
June
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. In January, the
price
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 of
Nickel
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 accounted for the highest
percentage
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 with 6%,
while
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 the
price
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 of Zinc constituted the lowest proportion with 1%. The figure for
Nickel
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 witnessed a drastic fall to a low of -3% in
June
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, which was followed by a significant rise to 1% in the
last
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 two months of the
year
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. In spite of a remarkable surge of 3% for Zinc
price
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change
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 in February,
this
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trend
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 plunged to -1% in
June
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 similar to that of
Nickel
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.
This
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trend
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 experienced an upward
trend
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 to 2% in December, which made up the highest proportion. The
percentage
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change
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 of Cooper's
price
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initially
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 started from 2%, which decreased considerably almost below zero per cent in May/
June
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.
This
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trend
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 reached approximately 2%
at the end
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 of the
year
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 after the period of five-month instability.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, nickel, year, percentage, change, june, trend with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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