Some people believe that development in
technology
helps in decreasing the crime
rate
,
while
others think it would increase. In my opinion,
technology
is helping in committing more
crimes
such
as cyber-
crimes
, identity theft and fraud. In
this
essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and support my opinion.
On one hand,
technologyReplace the word
show examples
advancement would reduce the
rate
of
crimes
due to
implementing modern security systems at homes and companies,
such
as advanced surveillance cameras and more
securedReplace the word
show examples
saves. Many houses, corporations and institutions, nowadays, are secured with advanced security systems and
alarmFix the agreement mistake
show examples
when anyone tries to break in,
consequently
, would decrease the burglary
rate
.
Moreover
, using advanced equipment in
forensicReplace the word
show examples
,
for example
, DNA analysis would accelerate
Correct article usage
show examples
detectingReplace the word
show examples
criminalsChange preposition
show examples
in murders and other
crimes
which might deter them from committing more
crimes
.
On the other hand
, the development in
technology
would encourage
crimes
as
the Correct article usage
show examples
criminals can use it to commit
crimes
more easily. Recently,
Correct article usage
show examples
cyber-Correct your spelling
show examples
crimes
rate
has elevated,
for instance
, hacking and stealing important data from people and institutions' computers.
Additionally
, using fake identities to deceive others, to raise money, and to commit frauds.
Furthermore
,
technology
implementation in military weapons would increase massive destruction and surge the
rate
of killing when used in wars.
In conclusion,
technologyReplace the word
show examples
advancement has its advantages in controlling more
crimes
,
however
, it
also
enhanceChange the verb form
show examples
different kinds of cyber-
crimes
. I believe that the hazards of
technology
outweigh its benefits in crime control.